Below is what
my acquaintance from Gotham wrote:
Overall, I am very impressed at your writing
skills. All those details about technology, weapons, the history of Hawaii, the
resentment of the natives, etc. shows you know so much. Even though I, the
reader, do not need all those technical details to follow your story, however
it gives me pleasure to read them. They add to the fabric of your story, making
it feel real. As I had said in my comments during our Gotham class, the fact
that you have used your experiences with ALS and created a character who is high-tech
and kicks ass is both fun and inspiring.
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